I wrote this during a free class in school. Despite distractions from those so keen to read it, I managed to piece together what I would refer to as a simplistic poem based on the deepest, and most precious thoughts in my mind.
This one is dedicated to Caroline, my big sister. It's very unlike sisters to be as close as we are, so this one's for you. I hope you like it.
And we're all grown up now.
Our lives have become different:
But, at least, we know more how's.
How to distinguish right from wrong;
And venture through life's song,
In a bigger world than the one between
All of our old walls.
As the clouds roll past on the table,
And the words don't spill from my head.
I remember all the days we spent together
And every single word you ever said.
I wonder at times, do you think of me?
And our childhood as it's gone?
To whisper softly in nostalgia,
And, then, continue to go on.
I hope you know you're a piece of me
More than just in my mind..
You make up most of my memories,
Each one that I seem to find:
As I sit here thinking about a theme,
Or a topic, for my poem,
My mind wanders to a place,
I'll forever know as home.

4th March 2014
This one is dedicated to Caroline, my big sister. It's very unlike sisters to be as close as we are, so this one's for you. I hope you like it.
All of Our Old Walls
The time went by too quickly,And we're all grown up now.
Our lives have become different:
But, at least, we know more how's.
How to distinguish right from wrong;
And venture through life's song,
In a bigger world than the one between
All of our old walls.
As the clouds roll past on the table,
And the words don't spill from my head.
I remember all the days we spent together
And every single word you ever said.
I wonder at times, do you think of me?
And our childhood as it's gone?
To whisper softly in nostalgia,
And, then, continue to go on.
I hope you know you're a piece of me
More than just in my mind..
You make up most of my memories,
Each one that I seem to find:
As I sit here thinking about a theme,
Or a topic, for my poem,
My mind wanders to a place,
I'll forever know as home.

4th March 2014
Very good, you're a very good poet. So much so this poem nearly brought tears to my eyes.
ReplyDeleteThanks man, really appreciate it :)
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DeleteCongratulation Joanne
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Thank You Katherine :D
DeleteWell put together Joanne, using your talent is good for you and everyone that reads your poems. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dad :) Really appreciate it!
DeleteStill makes me smile :) :') xxx
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